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tab She is smiling. She’s laughing, really. She’s laughing in that silent way that really counts.
tab There is a mass of trees and vines behind her where pale purple flowers hang. They are the kinds of flowers that bees enjoy buzzing around. I remember avoiding them when I was younger, because I’d always been afraid of bees.
tab Apparently she’d never been afraid of bees (or anything). If there are any bees there, she doesn’t pay them any mind. Just like she doesn’t pay any mind to the strands of long, brown hair that have flown across her face to stick against her lipgloss. It’s vanilla-cherry flavored. It’s always vanilla-cherry flavored, I don’t need to think about it.
tab It is a sunny day, of course – and windy, hence the flyaway hair. She’s wearing a beautiful sundress, pale yellow with spots of violet flowers. She’s taken off her shoes and set them by the tree behind her. She looks at me with a laughing face, and laughing eyes, and laughing everything.
tab She’s laughing, laughing, laughing.
tab I set the photograph on her coffin before I leave, next to a wreath of pale purple flowers.
- by Julia Dream |
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- | Submitted on 03/16/2010 |
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- Title: untitled microfiction
- Artist: Julia Dream
- Description: microfiction/flash fiction piece.
- Date: 03/16/2010
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Miki Moshi Kimoto - 04/02/2010
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Wow.....speechless.
(and I love how you have the same name as me! [mine in real life]) :] - Report As Spam
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 03/17/2010
- I like how Moose says "an perfect grammar"
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- hazuinf - 03/17/2010
- Once again, you combine an perfect grammar, great emotion and a beautiful plot, perfectly. I have noticed a quite macabre note in all your writing, but I think this just enhances all of it, making your writing much more interesting. Brilliant!
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- BlackDream12 - 03/16/2010
- Beautiful. Your plot twists make everything so interesting. You make me want to read more!
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 03/16/2010
- Oh, Julia, you build up a well of enticement and joy, and then strike it down in a flash. Gloriously displayed with heavy imagery and the syntactical skill of a true master of the art
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- PoisonousMoonlight - 03/16/2010
- I like it sort of has that plot twist you don't EVER EVER expect. I love this 5/5
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