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Six teens get dared to visit and spend the night, at a creepy old house in the middle of town,every Halloween.
This is stupid. Why do I have to go? asked Alex
Because we all played truth or dare on halloween. Answered Dani.
Let's just get this over with. said Felix. Paul agreed
Alex, Dani, Alice, Felix, Paul, and Cassie all walked to the house ready for the night.
I-its just an old house ...Whats the big deal.said Cassie
But what if theres some thing there?Like a Ghost?Asked Alice
Awww my little alice is scared. said Paul as he held the door open.
they set up sleeping bags in the dinning room.
Where's Alex? asked Felix.
he probly went to look around. replyed Cassie
Paul,i'm scared. Said Alice
It's okay. Said Paul looking about the dark room.
Alice,is it okay if if Paul and I go look around? Felix will keep u safe. Asked Cassie
But...Okay...Go ahead.Alice answered as she sat by Felix.
Cassie and Paul started up the staircase.
I wonder where Alex and Dani are. Said Paul
Thats what im going to find out. Cassie said looking for a clue.
Oh cool you like creepy things too? Asked Paul with a low chuckle.
No, I like haunted stuff.It's fun. replyed Cassie.
They hear a faint voice, yelling in the distance.
That sounded like Alex!Paul and Cassie exclaimed running to the back room, Where they found Alex's body and Blood all over the room.
OH MY GOD....ALEX!!!!! yelled Cassie
There's nothing we can do.Said Paul hugging Cassie.
HE'S MY BROTHER!!!WHO DID THIS!!!!Screamed Cassie Punching away at Pauls cheast
We have to go back to the other's.Paul nad Cassie raced down stairs.
Felix,Alice your okay.Paul and Cassie hugged them both.They were as cold as death.
What happened?Demanded Paul.
Th-They are coming back.Said Alice
Who?asked Cassie
The old man who killed Alex!Said Felix Punching the ground.
Danm,come on we have to stay together.Said Cassie getting everyone up and holding hands they checked the bathroom.nothing.then the den.
NO!he got Dani!Yelled Alice.
Dani was hanging by a thread drenched in blood.
come on help me take him down.
Felix and Paul cut the thread but it was embedded into his neck.
What do we do now?asked Felix
Now we search the room.
I THINK I FOUND SOMETH-.Felix's sentence was cut short by a bucher knife to the back
the killer must be Close.
Lets check the kitchen.Suggested Alice
The final three walked to the kitchen.
It looks brand new.Alice said admiring the gorgeous teal kitchen.
Alice stay close.Paul grabbed her and she fell, her head bashed on the counter killing her.ALICE! I swear I didnt mean to.
It's okay she tripped on the roller.Cassie and Paul ran to the basement and out came a blueish figure.
GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!screeched the figure.
Cassie threw a lamp at the figure, it shattered on contact.
What are you?
I'm the person staying here.The figure lunged at Paul.Paul stabbed it head on it was dead now.
Let's get outta here!Paul and Cassie left the house and Exactly one month later they both died in their sleep,right at midnight.
THE END
- by AsaShigure958 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/23/2010 |
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- Title: Fatal Night
- Artist: AsaShigure958
- Description: I wrote this on halloween for my drama teacher ^^
- Date: 07/23/2010
- Tags: fatal night
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Comments (3 Comments)
- AsaShigure958 - 05/24/2011
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Oh hush I was in a hurry and didn't feel like bothering with them at that time
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- Irenex3 - 05/22/2011
- Ever hear of quotation marks?
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- jazzdere - 09/18/2010
- ...strange.
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