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You have no idea how it feels. To have such a magnificent mental power. But this power is destroying you from the inside out. It makes you feel like someone tricked you into taking a "gift" and it turned out to be a curse. I was told when they wired me to the machine that my mind was strong enough to hold this power. The thing they didn't tell is that it would make you get these voices and thoughts.
I have the power to read minds, move things with my mind, and make you feel and see things that aren't their. But the side effect are so horrible. Sometimes it get so bad, I just want to end it all. But enough of that let me get to the real story.
I was standing in front of the man. He was so messed up. Not physically, mentally. We had been in the Dark Room for the past two hours. I had torturing him more than most humans can take. He wasn't breaking. It would have kill him if it continued.
He started to mumble something. It was probably hard for him to talk.
"What was that? I couldn't hear you." I said calmly.
"I said I'll talk just make the spiders go away. Th, they are all over me." I smiled.
"Good." I released my power. He shivered in fear. If your asking the question "Why is he torturing this man?" well the reason for that is because he was a scientist for a terrorist organization called THE PEOPLE OF THE NEW ORDER, or for short PNO. To put it in a simple way this organization is trying to take over the word and make a new order (thats were their name comes in) that puts their members in power. O and when they do this everyone else will be slaves to the power and do all they are told. I know BS right.
For that very reason I joined the rebels called CANDLE. This is an underground organization. They intend good for the people (so I think).
- by spyritsentry |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/29/2010 |
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- Title: Break Page 1
- Artist: spyritsentry
- Description: This story is about a man being driven into insanty by his own mind and the things inside
- Date: 11/29/2010
- Tags: break action mind strange
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ashurado - 08/15/2013
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You might want to make corrections like "I had torturing him..." it's supposed to be in the passed tense and say "I had tortured him."
That line also needs work because it doesn't make much sense.
You also need to work on punctuation and editing, because it isn't very clear to understand.
Over all, it's ok, but it reminds me of many dystopian stories (like 1984 or The Giver), so it isn't very 'original' - Report As Spam
- JCCLARK - 12/21/2010
- seth tec you look like a monkey on crack your character and in real life
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- Seth Tec - 12/18/2010
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lol candle corp i dont remember r they good o nm dont spoil it
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