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Preface
It all started twenty years before I was born.
Our village was cursed by the Gods for committing
an unforgivable injustice. A crime so atrocious
that all believed they deserved the punishment. All
but Mr. Felish that is.
Mr. Felish was a nutty old man. He thought that
everything he said or did was correct. He lived in
the middle of the forest. Miles from the village.
His house was a rundown shack filled with rats and
hunting equipment. Coats of dead creatures were
mounted onto the walls and covered the wooden floor.
There was a creaking staircase in the middle of the
house that lead up to the one bedroom, where Mr.
Felish slept. For years teenagers would creep around
his house as a dare or to impress their friends. One
night that all ended. Mr. Felish came into the
village at midnight, with a spear in one hand and a
knife in the other. He broke into every household and
murdered every child in the village. The sun rose in
the morning and screams of mothers entering the rooms
of their children filled the air.
The angry villagers knew who had carried out this
devilish deed and set off with pitchforks and torches.
When they arrived at the old shack they seen Mr.
Felish inside and started burning it to the ground. A
couple of braver men ventured inside to make sure he
died. A nineteen year old man was the one to kill him.
Took a spear straight through his heart. When Mr.
Felish died he looked up at his killer, Dakota Lebar,
and laughed. He laughed an unbearable laugh that
haunted Dakota his entire life.
Dakota and his wife, Marie, were expecting their
first child any day now. It's why Dakota was so
frightened of the mass murder. It wasn't until after
Marie had a very painful labor and delivered a baby,
that the villagers realized their Gods had put a curse
on them. The child did not breathe. He had pale blue
skin but a large, unnatural smile across his face.
Dakota himself burned his child in a fire, hopefully
to rid the town of such evil.
It didn't work. Every child that was born for the
next twenty years had those same features. The villagers
were getting older and soon it would be impossible for
any of them to even conceive. Dakota and Marie, at the
age of thirty nine, tried once more for a baby.
Marie didn't have a great pregnancy like they hoped.
They all still prayed to their Gods for forgiveness. One
day Marie hunched over her swollen belly clearly in
pain and said "Dakota! It's time! The baby is coming".
Dakota gathered two midwives and rushed back home just
in time to see a small baby wriggling in a puddle of
blood. The midwives dropped their equipment and ran
over to Marie and the baby, that was now crying. "She
has lost too much blood!" one of the midwives cried.
Dakota was in too much shock to even move from where he
stood. One of the midwives wrapped the baby in a blanket
and handed it him to Dakota. "Congratulations, it's a boy.
We need you to leave the room now." He was in so much shock
he wasn't sure if he should even be holding this miracle
in his hands. The midwife pushed Dakota out of the room.
He sat down in the living room and looked at his son.
He had black hair and dark brown eyes. Soon the room
filled with villagers in awe. All of them wanting a turn
holding the new baby. "I am going to name him Sebastian,
Sebastian Lebar" Dakota announced.
One of the midwives came in to break the bad news.
She hung her head when she said "Marie has lost too much
blood. She won't make it through the night. I'm sor-".
Dakota got up and practically threw Sebastian to her and
ran into the bedroom. He frantically told his wife to
hang in there. He held her hand until her last breath
was given. Immediately afterwards he got up, didn't say
a single word to anyone. He went to Mr. Felish's old
house, got down on his knees and cried. "You've taken
her from me!" He yelled. "You took her from me" He
repeated in a whisper. Then he got up with a shard of
glass in his hand. "Why didn't you take me instead?!"
Right then he jammed the glass as far into his midsection
as he could. The villagers found him weeks later.
Nobody was sure what to do with Sebastian because babies
were being born in nearly every house. They placed him
in the Tumbler household. Where he soon had a brother and
a sister.
*****
Many people thought I was a great omen. Something
wonderful. They believed I was a gift from God. A gift
that told them that the Gods forgave them for past
mistakes and that life can move on. They were DEAD wrong.
- by Kitokos Kunai |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/17/2011 |
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- Title: Open for suggestions
- Artist: Kitokos Kunai
- Description: I need some constructive criticism. If this is horrible then I'm not going to continue writing it.
- Date: 05/17/2011
- Tags: open suggestions death demons mystery
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