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17th of December, Winter
-I wish I didn't do that to her when I still lived here.How idiot can i be? Why did I not realize that she had done her best to keep me happy?The most important person to me... I've becoming blind..couldn't be considerate about her feeling. I chose to be unfair for her.I denied what's she had done for me.I have no rights to get back to her again...but...still I cannot lie about my feelings. I must see her! -
Wind rushed roughly that evening, in the cold surrounding, a young woman sat on the bench at the edge of frozen lake. Satoshi finally arrived and quickly ran towards her.The skinny look and white glittering hair flashed in his mind as he look at her and began to lost focus.His mind circling about her appearance.
-Snap-
"Sato-kun, are you okay?"
"Uh..yeah..I'm okay..."Blinked his eye and tried to see her face again.
There was no glittering white hair.She has dark brown hair.She went to him and grabbed his hand while whispering something softly.He tried to listened and suddenly realize something.Her hand was cold...really cold.
"Noriko? Your hand is cold. How long you have been staying outside?"
Um...I just feel bored,so I went outdoors. I know its not good..." She nodded,hiding her face.Sniffing while she grabbing his hand. He knew he had made her suffered...yet she didn't not show her anger and hatred .He hugged her tightly.
"You know,you can hate me,you can scream and shout at me whenever you want,but I still like you. I know about the promises,and I broke it 10 years ago.And I know,there is no more chance for me,but I would like to try again. Will you forgive me?
Listened to what he said,Noriko smiled and her tear began to fall.She softly chuckled and 'smiled the best smile and said,
"You and me, we can still be a good friend like before.When we are still Noriko... and Satoshi. I forgive you...but I cant accept you back..." She stopped and pulled her hand away from him.Satoshi gripped his hand.The depression on his face,he looked at her. Her smiled face with tears. -She have been suffered a lot...and she hurt ...because of me....- Tears began to fall,he covered his face with his hand. Her heart hurts as she saw Satoshi cry.She went to him and hugged.
"But still you are not alone, you still have her..."
"No...Not her....I don't love her like I love you. I know you hate me after what happen,but please trust me,I don't...."He tried to hold his tears.The mistake is not easy...
"I don't really mind.What happen in the past is not important. I want you both happy. She is my twin,we have same look,same voices, and same interest....I;m sure you'll like her."
"No..."
"Sato-kun,promise me this,and I want you to keep it....The moment we become friends and meet each other everyday at school and becoming your girlfriend are the best moment I will never forget. Ill cherish those memories I had with you. Thank you for the good memories."
"Noriko...." She smiled and whisper to his ear.
"Satoshi...this is where we will depart...sayonara....Sato-kun..."
A cold kissed he felt on his cheek.Suddenly the wind blows as he tried to reach her hand but he can only feel the cold air and passed out in the winter.The heavy snow storms finally stopped and a passerby man saw Satoshi was covered with snow lying on the ground.The passerby man help him and tried to wake him up.He then went surprised as Satoshi suddenly screamed and tried to look for her in rthe snow.He then asked the man
"Did you see a young woman with pink dress here? She's with me just now."
"No mr. Just you alone."
-Wait,I sawher before the storm,she left...but where is she?Why is sho going into the snow.?-
[Satoshi~~~~]
"Noriko?" He looked at place where they talked just now.Is ti a dream? How can she just disappear like that?
=ThE eNd
pROMISES
- by Bluenaria_ |
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- | Submitted on 04/06/2015 |
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- Title: A winter left
- Artist: Bluenaria_
- Description: A long lost childhood promise have been stained after years past, regretted by a young man Satoshi who return to old home to fix back the mistake he had done to her.This is my first time writin in this arena, and I know im suck at this.Anyway if you guys love it ,plz rate mey...if not plz go easy on meh T_T
- Date: 04/06/2015
- Tags: winter left
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