A poem of Great Hate.

• Artist: iiDance2n0thing
• Description: :/ this is a true poem :/
  Made by iiDance2n0thing & xx-c0tt0n C4ndii-xx
• Date: 01/27/2010
• Tags: poem great hate

You will never know how i truly feel,
about these lies, and the bullshit you put me through,
I thought you loved me, but i thought wrong...
i loved you and this is how you treat me?
like some ******** toy? That you got bored of?
Thanks to you my life is ruined.
I get called a freak because of you,
its all your fault, it always has been,
you are a ghost of my past, a fallen soul that will rot in Hell, and I laugh because you don't care or feel what you have done to me...
Therefore, I could care less about you,
I'm never going back to you, and I will never treat you the same way, I am not a toy, I am a human being and i should be respected, you have brought tears to my eyes and pain to my heart
You...I can't explain you, I have never felt disgust and distrust from someone...The more I think of you the more pain it brings
Get out of my life, you are nothing but trouble. Go rot in hell, you ******** a*****e, ******** you.

Comments

[Morbid Humour]

I actually adore poems with no rhyme scheme. For one, they are a hell of a lot easier to write. And for two, they're less Shakespearean. ^^
You have a great poem here. But a few small touch-ups regarding your grammar will go a really long way. Often these small errors distract from the great work that lies beneath them. ;D

[Morbid Humour]

Sir MischiefLycan, need I remind you that there is no such thing as a bad poem. But it is safe to say that you don't find this poem particularly decadent. That I do understand.
Dance2n0thing: Your poem is awesome, it really is. It is clear that you have a lot of emotion to share in your writing. Please keep writing! Sir Lycan does not know what he is talking about. ><

[S t u n n u h]

a lot of profanity ,
buh i sortaa get wut chu talkin about

[VxMischiefLycanxV]

That is a horrible poem.

[Roxas_the_Thirteenth]

O_O