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wahmbulance wahmbulance Angie was thinking where am i going? who is this person driving? Is is a man or a lady? Mean while her friends still at the party called Angie cell phone. There was no answer. They left a message saying: Angie het its us we are worreid about you. Where are you? ok call me back. But what they didnt know was that Angie was not at teh party not even near the party. As Angie was still tied up in the pack seat of this car. she heard teh drive say: what was that sound? To another man in the car. Then she felt a huge hand touch her a** and she tried to scream but no sound came out. the man said she has a nice a**. He grabbed the phone from her pocket. opened it and said: she has a voiceamail. Play it. When Angie heard the voicemail she wiggled lose from teh bag that she had been placed in. and screamed a teh sight of two young teenagers about 16 or 17. The teenager that was sitting next to her reached across and coverd her mouth. he looked her in the eyes adn said if your quiet we wont hurt you.
TO BE FINSHED.......
- by blackdeath144 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: A STORY Part: 2
- Artist: blackdeath144
- Description: Its sad but true. I hope that no one has to go though the same things.
- Date: 07/20/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- blackdeath144 - 09/04/2010
- It did happen to me. I am Angie
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- la Reina de calabaza - 05/10/2009
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Try to spell a little better? And this is TRUE? Wow.
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- _PiStAcHiO sOuP_ - 01/02/2009
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how is this true? -.-
obviously it didn't happen to you, so who?
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- _PiStAcHiO sOuP_ - 01/02/2009
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how is this true? -.-
obviously it didn't happen to you, so who?
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- Pyraticen - 11/12/2008
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You might want to brush up on your punctuation and spelling. Spoken phrases have quotations around them, sentences start with a capital letter, and "the" is spelled t-h-e, amongst various other misspellings.
Otherwise, it's... suspenseful. But personally, I was too distracted by the confusion of no quotations to understand most of the story. - Report As Spam
- Adrenaline Monkey - 07/21/2008
- i really like this story i read the first part, but I really need to see what happens next!
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- blackdeath144 - 07/20/2008
- read the first part...i am gonig to start teh third in a little bite
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