- Near to the door he paused to stand as he took his class ring off her hand.All who where watching did not speak,as a silent tear ran down his cheek.And through his mind the memories ran as they walked and ran in the sand,hand in hand.But now her eyes where so terribly cold,for he would never again have her to hold.she was so silent.She wasn't going to be there to love.so there was no purpose.he had nothing to live for.he was so,so filled with anger.he was the only person who could have stoped her.but,now,she was gone.he suddenly bent near and whispered the words,"I love you" in her ear.she,wasn't going to stay.But,he knew she would always be with him,in his dreams and in his heart.just then the wind began to blow as they lowerd her cascet in the snow.And as he started to cry,he wished he could die and be at her side again.
- by XxDarling_Rosey_PoseyxX |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Misery
- Artist: XxDarling_Rosey_PoseyxX
- Description: this is dedicated to my bf who died in a car accident.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: misery form
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Comments (3 Comments)
- King Exseada - 11/03/2008
- i don't completely get the story. it's sorta missing stuff.
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- Lord Shadow Sanctuary - 11/03/2008
- Make a space after the comma
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- XxDarling_Rosey_PoseyxX - 11/03/2008
- wow!! I think i did realy good!
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