- well I'll go back about 10 years to the Incidents. When I was about 4 or 5 my mom was dating this guy Kenny. And he was a total b***h. he was mean and violent with me and my mother. We had been poor most of our life so we were used to it, But Kenny was a total bum (and still is). he wanted to live in our house, eat our food, and spend what little money we had. Except one thing he never got off his a** and got a job, he went out drinking. Well one night he came home really really drunk. He couldn't find his Apartment key(which was in his pocket) so he started pounding on the door and screaming." OPEN THIS ******** DOOR YOU SON OF A b***h." and of course my mother was asleep so she didn't hear him. but then he started pounding on the door as hard as he could.(which by this time i was awake and fully aware of what was happening) He started screaming"I SWEAR TO GOD U ******** b***h IF YOU DON'T OPEN THIS ******** DOOR NOW I SWEAR I'M GONNA KILL YOU. YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING LITTLE c**t." Now my mom was awake and she was furious. As she was walking to the door she put on a fake smile. she unlocked the door and saw him waiting at the other side of the hall. she told him to come in and he did ....but as soon as he got to the doorway she hit him in the face with the door. He sat there stunned for a second wondering what the hell had just happened.when he realized it the look on my moms face said it all. Just then she had realized how big of a mistake she had made and was terrified.He lunged at her slamming her to the ground. Punch after punch i could hear her screaming. so i came out of my room to see what it was by the time i got past the child safe doorknob my moms face was completely bloody and kenny had gotten his switchblade out. just as he was about to stab my mother i screamed out .NOOOOOO!!! then he turned and saw me and tried to run at me. my mom grabbed and twisted his ankle ,which broke it. then he fell to the floor. After i was sure he wasn't going to hurt me i ran in my room and got the biggest and hardest toy i could find. i came out that room running and screaming. i went up to his head and started whacking as hard as i could. not only did i severely injure him, and destroy my toy. but the left foot was stuck in the loose flesh of his cheek. after that my mom called the police and he was arrested. then he came back to live with us a month later. After that i wasn't allowed in my room alone when he was home.( He said it was for my own saftey) other than that he pretty much left me alone and i was happy. Then i went onto live a regularish life and here i am today
- Title: The Incident
- Artist: 3oh3 fan
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Description:
real life story from the past
Plz tell me what to improve on and thanks for reading - Date: 02/15/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- roseade667 - 03/17/2009
- o_O umm why would u write this
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- 3oh3 fan - 02/17/2009
- thank you and im creating an edited version now ^^♥
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- xoXRistiaXox - 02/16/2009
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wow its rlly good, if ur gonna write a story tho put more detail, put all your emotions, all you moms emotions and describe the area, and put paragraphs to separate the ideas and to create suspense hehe but otherwise you had wonderful ideas and a wonderful beginning for an autobiography
-Kitana ♥ - Report As Spam
- 3oh3 fan - 02/16/2009
- plz comment
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