the Bitter Irony of Life

• Artist: Nadoosh86
• Description: it's just the feelings and thoughts that overwhelmed me for the past 2 hours..and are still are..
• Date: 12/24/2009
• Tags: bitter irony life

it wasn't easy
i just stared at him..
his blue face..
his wide gaze to the ceiling..open mouthed..
his cold hand..

he's a healthy 40 year old...
no wait..he was..
did he see it coming?
then again..does any1 of us see it coming..

how did he spend his last day..
and if he could come back..would he thank those who cared about him..helped him..loved him..
or just leave them unappreciated..

we get a million chance..
a day passes after another..
but we won't care enough to see past our ego ..
we won't care enough to forgive
to say "thank you"
or "I love you"
..or just.."take care..make me proud.."

we won't care enough..until we're looking down from heavens..
wishing for that one minute..[/size]

Comments

[DeniHazelnut]

Oh by the way my comment is in 3 parts because it didnt fit in one message lol. Anyway, fisrt read the one of the bottom and then the ones in the the top. :O

[DeniHazelnut]

Dead is something not to be fearful, because we are the ones who decided how we live life...we can live each day fully, knowing that we jut have today... smile

I like the thinking you made, have 4 out of five stars

[DeniHazelnut]

Dead and leaving issues unresolved is always a great topic to explore. Its true, many leave this world without caring and saying what the people around truly meant to them...I don't know but I have been reading (randomly, without me choosing them) a lot pieces of work that deal with dead and the fear of facing it. Honestly, I don't get it. Dead not only is when you are buried deep down in the earth with people crying around your coffin, but it also can come in many ways.