My loves

• Artist: Zombiegir1
• Description: poems that i have written.... dont have much time to describe....
• Date: 02/24/2011
• Tags: loveheartbreaklonelysad

love is the key to open my doors but my doors are impossible to open...~ZombieG

Everytime everyday i think of you all in everyway i see your faces i learn your doubts you tell me your secrets but i never say and i think and i look and i sway for my overwhelment and i look at you i dream of you i see you i hate this i love you ~ZombieG~

Comments

[BelleKat]

I think your poem could really benefit from some punctuation, and spacing, and overall formatting...But the substance might be good. And also..is "overwhelment" a word? I need to go look that up...