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Wishing of a better time,
Wishing of a better day,
If only I could see the sun,
To thus make me gay.
But the sun will never come,
When I am all alone.
So come ye demons of the night,
And break apart my soul.
A passing sigh of lust and love,
Breaks me from the core.
If only I was not alone,
To calm my spirit more and more.
This door is locked again,
Waiting for a wonderous key.
But these scars of lust and love,
Never release me.
Wishing of a better time,
Wishing of a better day,
But the treasure of your soul is gone,
At least gone for me.
Comments (7 Comments)
- carZed - 11/29/2008
- Your welcome Piggy. I am glad you like them Eragon! biggrin
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- Twiggity Twang - 11/29/2008
- I'm sorry, but I forgot to mention this is the best poem I have ever read!
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- Twiggity Twang - 11/29/2008
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Incredible, to say the very least...In fact, that is some the best work I have ever read..........Yes, yes, very good in deed...You deserve more than 5....
Rating: 42/5
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- carZed - 11/28/2008
- lol Thank you!
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- OneArmedVoodooDoll - 11/28/2008
- Very Nice! I liked how everything strung together. Although, I couldn't really tell if it was about depression and loneliness, or mastrubation. Either way, it was a fun read!
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