from depressed to okay

• Artist: sports_girl1122
• Description: i let out everything that i needed to
  and i figured out why im depressed
• Date: 12/04/2008
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i let it out
i dont know why
i let it out
now ill die
i let it out
cuz i couldnt take it
i let it out
and i couldnt fake it
i let it out
and i guess its ok
i let it out
and ill live another day
i let it out
and i guess i wont die
i let it out
and i now i dont cry
i let it out
and i feel good inside
i let it out
so theres no more to hide

Comments

[TercesX]

I'm sorry Sports girl, but Minorixx is kinda right. It would've been better if you actually wrote things out. Proper Spelling and Grammar will get you a win. =D
2/5. Good poem, poor, poor Grammar.

[sports_girl1122]

watever
i dont care wat u say anymore
like
u dont even know wat im going through
nobody does
ya
ik that other people hav problems of there own
but still
this is my stuff

[Blinded By S H I T]

lol ok
your poems are "good"

[sports_girl1122]

dam
okok
jeeze
u never hav nice stuff to say to me
i mean
u could say that my poems r good
i mean seriously

[Blinded By S H I T]

tis good,
but you spelled because, cuz
and thats not like
i cant take you seriously,
and you have bad grammer.

lol, i keep bumping into your poems in the arenas.

[Princess Aqua Moon]

simple but its a good poem