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[/cshe cuts away at herself
removing what she does not like
picking and carving until she
has created her masterpiece
she wants to be perfect
she wants to look like
the models on the covers
of the magazines
beauty is in the eye of the beholder
but in her mind she is ugly
self mutilation to make
one self perfect
why does she does she
do this to herself
cant she see that she is beautiful
I am perfect and so are you
believe me its true
no one can be prettier than you
what will her parents do
can any one really help her
what can the doctors do
nothing but sedate her
she hates herself
she wants to be thin
shes starving herself until
she is nothing more than skin
beauty is in the eye of the beholder
but in her mind she is ugly
self mutilation to make
one self perfect
why does she does she
do this to herself
cant she see that she is beautiful
I am perfect and so are you
believe me its true
no one can be prettier than you
she wanted to be perfect
heaven can only help her now
when you carve everything away
theres nothing left to salvage
the masterpiece falls apart
and crumbles to the ground
self mutilation to make
one self perfect
why does she does she
do this to herself
cant she see that she is beautiful
I am perfect and so are you
no one can be prettier than you
I am perfect and so are you
no one can be prettier than you
- by cobra the half demon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Perfection
- Artist: cobra the half demon
- Description: i got the idea for this from a re-accruing nightmare i was having about a mentally disturbed girl mutilating herself trying to make herself look perfect. it really struck a nerve with me and i had to write it down to make it stop haunting me.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: perfection
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ninja-kyoko-chan - 07/17/2008
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i liked it. i don't care what that other person said.
its smart, and im glad that someone finally said something about this kind of thing.
keep posting the dreams like these
or anything else that strikes a nerve
because CAN'T YOU SEE IT'S BEAUTIFUL?!
haha, quotes...that sounded scary... - Report As Spam
- Tsuki Kurai - 07/15/2008
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There is no rhyming (not always needed, of course) and the vocab is mediocre.
Its neat the its from a dream tho. Keep practicing, and try using a thesaurus. - Report As Spam