Love

• Artist: lil4fingers
• Description: I wrote this poem a while back and still feel the meaning is true.
  
  P.S: bequeath means to give or given
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love advice

There's something people search for,
some look for it forever.
And while some of us my find it,
some of us won't ever.

You know the feeling when you look
deep into their eyes.
No matter how hard you try to tell them
in your many failed tries.

You tried to tell them during class
and tried after school.
But somehow you always ended up
looking like a fool.

So here's advice bequeath to you
people reading this.
"Finding love can be the hardest thing...
but feeling love is bliss."

Never give up.

Comments

[whoopity]

Loved it♥ Somehow, it's simple, but it tells so much.

[77 vimmy]

Fantastic smile

[Xx_iNatRal_Xpressionz_xX]

Great Job keep it going.

[rock star emma]

are u kidding this is great

[vampire_effect123]

Hey I voted 4 you!!!! I think its awsome not just b/c Im your friend ^_^

[dancer4llife]

That's not too bad. I like it.
And, for some reason, it reminds me of something, but I don't know what. I let my friend read this, she said she loved it and that it reminded her of me... Oh well, either way, it's still really good. Continue with this.

[bluefir111]

i thought it was good. umm i jst broke up with my gf of one year a few days ago so love things arent high on my list. and im a very dark person as you could tell from my poems on Devaint art.