Little Miss Perfect

• Artist: theresana1234
• Description: A story about Little Miss Perfect, Laurie, and how someone unlikely tried to help her
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: littlemissperfect help outcast bored tsukushi1234

Little Miss Perfect, always truth for the purpose,
Little Miss Perfect, lies under the surface,
Little Miss Perfect,sees she is the best,
While I...see the rest

I am an outcast; I see what is not seen,
I see how Little Miss Perfect has always been.
I am the lied to and the deceived
While Little Miss Perfect is a cause to be perceived.

Little Miss Perfect trusts no one
I try to help her, but now I am done
She scolds and swears
So why do I help with her affairs?

She cheats and breaks hearts
I was the keeper of the charts
There are many who depart
But Little Miss Perfect doesn’t come apart.

There is a man for her
“Please stay away, monsieur”
“She will be done with you in a week”
“But please do not critique”
Little Miss Perfect played with him
But this relationship was a whim
Then she saw my man
And so it began

It started out with a smile
And continued awhile
She decided it was worthwhile
“Goodbye” went Kyle.
He believed they’d go down the aisle
But then there was Lyle.

He was very charming
Although he did a lot of farming
Which she very much hated
Away went Lyle, the undated

And now we come to the end of my story
About a girl...named Laurie
I tried to help her, but to no avail
Perhaps, I shouldn’t have turned tail.

Comments

[likeicare11]

0.0 niiiiccceeeee

[Data163]

woot 3rd commenter,second it was very creative and i could feel the emotions in the poem.

[member_of_the_FFA]

very nice with a good moral. excellent

[blue_kagome000]

omg i lovesss it

[On Frail Wings Of Vanity]

You tried to rhyme every single sentence and it messed up the poem. But it would have been good if you didn't rhyme every line. For example: "Although he did a lot of farming and He was very charming". Has nothing to do with the poem.