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You cast your eyes down
As I plead my needs
To be looked upon as a girl
Or ever even seen
I grew of my own will
Became what I desired
You never even had a hand
In shaping who I am
But I need you to see
What this cold world has made of me
Through all the hardships and misdeeds
That were to fall on me
I ask only that you see
For I am now the better
I ask only that you know
You have done not for me
Your love an absence in my life
But still yet I strive
To show you what I am
To impress on what was not
I worked so very hard
And the better I became
But your minds do not change
And I in your eyes I remain
Nothing
Even as I stain
The earth far below
The tower which I lain
And yet I remain
Nothing..
- by Xx-Mystra-xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: Wingless angle...
- Artist: Xx-Mystra-xX
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Description:
a poem i wrote after reading one
of rachmaster67 poem...
ENJOY.. - Date: 07/21/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Steph-x-Chain - 02/12/2009
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ah, i've felt this way before too!
lovely poem :tear: keep it up ^ ^ - Report As Spam
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/28/2009
- very nice indeed. only on problem u spelled ur title wrong. its angel. besides that minor thing, nice job ^^
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- Macabre_Words - 12/13/2008
- I liked it too. as I said before "expect comments on all your work" I dont lie about that kind of thing >.<
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- Rachmaster67 - 07/23/2008
- I liked it.^^ It showed emotion, but not you know like the emotion was forced, more like it just came and that is what poetry is about.
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