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• Artist: Da Blufox
• Description: Just something I wrote. I got bored so it took me about 15 minutes or so. Sorry if its not that great but its been a while since I wrote one. I plan on making more. And if people seem to like them I may just submit them. If not then I'll just keep them to myself.
• Date: 07/23/2008
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Time is up, the doors are closed
But the truth is left exposed

A question floats in the abyss of space
And the answer is different in every face

While I can't say what the answer is, the question I know will never change
But to some you could call the question strange

Why ask what has no wrong answer yet is never right
Is is to find purpose or to see what is behind the word "life"

So to pass it on now I will ask you
Think first then answer, "Who are you?"

Comments

[sexey tiney]

for just 15 mins this is just plain good. you realy should put some more poems in the arena.

[Atheshya]

This is somewhat interesting, but it would be more interesting were there more of it. (it's short). Also, were you using meter? At times it seems like it. I do have one pretty big problem with this poem, though - you WERE rhyming, but in the fourth staza it seems as if you stopped. The last stanza isn't much better when it comes to that - both lines end with the word 'you'.
I'll rate this at three stars because what I have mentioned above, though if you really did use meter, maybe four*s