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And you say you're a real good chick, one who would stand by a friend, through thin, thick.
You dont realize that small words can jump back at you.
You're a rattlesnake that jumps out, if you must, & takes a poor mouse's life.
The beast steps on the dirt, towering over the life we've come to know; cherish.
She eats off your brain, like a zombie corpse to his bride.
'I'm taking you with me', per say, in a sense of which you're a fool.
However, I don't take it. I'm done.
Manipulation, Hatred, covered my life.
Drama, despair, covered my life.
That's where I'm from; the land of Imperfection. I'm reaching as realization hits home, that I'm finding whose real.
But i remember my loves, my passion, my soul. My support, my guidance, my community. My Spirit, my heart: all flutter off. Because in the end, my life is sheer beauty.
- by Rawr its DJ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: To Personfy; To Captivate
- Artist: Rawr its DJ
- Description: I made this during my summer program's homework assignment after reading Willie Perdomo's "Where I'm From" Poem he made when he was 21. I felt the need to share this poem because it was CAPTIVATING to me since I had to PERSONIFY my own life, and the way I've lived, what I've been through.
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: rawritsdj personify willie perdomo struggles
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Rawr its DJ - 07/25/2008
- Popular; At least you were honest. Theres a really big story behind it, and im sorry that it jumped from one subject to another; if that confused you.
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- [Radio~Suicide] - 07/25/2008
- Thats deep, awesome work dude. ^_^
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- pSyChO aPpLe - 07/25/2008
- I think its great!! keep up the good work, I like the zombie part too lol
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- Prostiboots - 07/25/2008
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I just...
There's not a great flow to it, it's seemingly a downward spiral kind of poem, then it much too abruptly shifts into something else.
And poetic license doesn't cover not capitalizing "I" or use of an ampersand unless it's symbolic, which neither here seem to be. D= - Report As Spam