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With tightly closed eyes
a tear runs down her face
thinking of the many wishes she has often placed
she lies alone, with no one home, and nothing close her side
her lovely face is covered in the streaming little lies
just wishing she could be sitting next his side
with all these crying hopes of desire deep within her mind
she eases in a chair and wishes one more time..
Written by: Paige heart
[KoolBeansBabee]
- by KoolBeansBabee |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/29/2008 |
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- Title: Little lies..
- Artist: KoolBeansBabee
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i need some opinions. - Date: 07/29/2008
- Tags: lies poem wishes tears
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Comments (2 Comments)
- DakaFalz - 07/30/2008
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very good job Pagie
could use a lil editing but its very good.
looking forward to more of your work!
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- funnyman332 - 07/29/2008
- Shouldn't the fourth line be "nothing close to her side? Still, very good, 5 =P
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