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Flower looking out on the windowsill
With the the sun looking in
The flower growing more
And more
And more
Towards the sun
Sun in the sky looking through the windowsill
With the flower looking out
The sun drifting farther
And farther
And farther
Away from the flower
It is now night when the sun disappears
Flower goes to bed on the windowsill
Knowing that the sun will be back the next day
- by My Mistress Natalia |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/11/2008 |
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- Title: HOME
- Artist: My Mistress Natalia
- Description: I'm not really good at poetry so please forgive me for this.
- Date: 08/11/2008
- Tags: home flower windowsill
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Zurah - 01/31/2009
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Punctuate.
The repetition of the 'and' lines didn't do you any good. - Report As Spam
- II Fantom 420k II - 01/05/2009
- For someone who isnt very good at poetry, this has all the points of a true poet, 5/5
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