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emotions have gravity,
a weight that pulls you down
making it almost unbearable to
function
breathe.
I lay in the ocean,
the ebb and flow of the tides
pulling the weight from my
body
soul.
as the tide retreats,
it takes everything
pain
guilt
remorse
sadness
as I lie there
for a moment, I'm suspended
everything stands still
time
emotion
thought.
in this place nothing exists.
there are no boundaries,
no walls,
there is nothing.
- by pretty hate machine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/27/2008 |
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- Title: Untitled
- Artist: pretty hate machine
- Description: I'm not really sure what to title this piece, but it was inspired the Nine Inch Nails song "The Great Below." Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Also keep in mind it's been a while since I've written anything. ^^;
- Date: 08/27/2008
- Tags: thegreatbelow thoughts practice
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- Mooneys gal - 11/13/2008
- Incredible, you are extremely talented
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