Tear

• Artist: Gene_starwind33
• Description: It may seem sad but i wrote it for the people i see in pain as well as myself. Just remember you are not the only one in pain. We all shed tears, more than others. I don't care if i win just know that someone out there will always care for you even if you are alone
• Date: 09/04/2008
• Tags: tear sadness caring pain love

I shed this tear for those who are weak for they are all with me. I shed this tear for those who are strong because they are against me. I shed this tear for the pain i feel inside and i shed another tear because the pain is what i have to hide. I shed a tear for the ones who love me, but do not understand. I shed a final tear for those who never reach out with a helping hand

Comments

[saurra san]

i shed many tears in the day when im awake, havent talked much about this but also while im sleeping i shed tears, maybe more than others i shed these tears, my sister may have shed more than i, who knows, ill never know.

[mystery123456789]

ehh a little scetchy it could be improved but 3/5

[midorikawa mizu]

i like it!!^^
its sad.. but i like it^^

[Gene_starwind33]

thank you. It was a kind of in the moment thing

[In Search of that Booty]

sad... T^T

[rocksan11]

umm nice job but i really am suprised this poem is great