Dearest Muse

• Artist: CM_Valyn
• Description: Because I had a surplus of....Angst and loneliness, plus some bitterly blistering feelings toward somebody, I scribbled this down five minutes ago, and was once again, curious to observe others opinions of my writen word vomit. Ssssh, it's all an allusion. ;3
• Date: 09/13/2008
• Tags: dearest muse

Neglect.
Rejection and
Dignity, nobleness, respect.
Isolation.
******** sucks.
Heh.
Arrogance
Discrimination
Hate
Abuse: Little else is so potent
Enough to piss me off
So with this I hope you've come to glimpse a sliver of my nature.
Commune with me at your will. Know
Discretion is yours to keep or abandon

Now

For I am a mind that shall simply listen,
To all that wish to speak
This is your address;

For one stilled and without response
Grant me a request;
Heed my presence before it expires, and lay upon me; words of
burden or idle fancies
Until this sustaining nectar that like sweet wine fills the chalice over brimming,
again left empty
without you
Uncertain ends.

Comments

[CM_Valyn]

It's like a ven diagram, but with three circles, the author's perspective and intended meaning, the reader's interpretation, a third circle that I forget what it was since I wasn't paying, and the inter joined thing in the middle is what....the heart of the thing? Form or essence? Getting into philosophy ideals...Hmmm, gonna cut off my rambles here. Again, thanks again for your time and consideration. ;3

Ps- Word limits=SUCK!

[CM_Valyn]

Tiyadore, I bet. So many things exist all at once, kinda like a stew, I've never really got how authors of poetry and what not could purposely create certain messages or whatever, like subliminal messages....That's whats cool about writing and reading.

[CM_Valyn]

Witch, I'm gonna have to say there's nothing better then oozing maple trees. Where'd we and our waffles be without 'em? Seriously though, all the stuff of the heart is universal, unless maybe your a sociopath.... Art is a medium to communicate and connect, without that, it's meaningless. So because somebody else has really had some emotions evoked...I'm going to say I've accomplished something. Yay.

[CM_Valyn]

Major squees man. I got comments, and all with more then three words! Really appreciate it you guys - Talking to self- Glad you like my diction, Nerine. I've never taken writing seriously, so this objective criticism is the stuff of inspiration.

[Tiyadore]

Haha, it has a deep meaning : O

[The Serendipity Witch]

Ah.. I certainly wouldn't want to be the subject of such a bitter poem, which is GREAT by the way. While I was reading it, I somehow felt your emotions [which makes me come across as a sap '-_-] Love the descriptive language and rhythm. smile

[0Nerine0]

1st!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great word choices they were to the point!