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Trust can never be given,
Love is appeased - unjust, untrue
Infatuation does its job,
serves its purpose
Blockade - built sturdy,
Refusing admittance
Now and forever
Walls destructed and torn down
How can I stop these tears
from falling down my face?
I'm sick
I'm through with it.
- by Mecca Against Reality |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/28/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Dam
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
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Description:
A poem I wrote almost two years ago. An intruder breaking into a barricade that has been constructed well.
I know most people don't like short poems, but I think it's okay.
Hope you like it.
Comment/rate, honestly! - Date: 09/28/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iBrightScales - 11/02/2008
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It's awesome!
Once again, I am in awe by your poetry. - Report As Spam
- earth eats sun - 11/01/2008
- wow! so many poems! i cant wait to start READING them all!
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- It all gets Reversed - 10/03/2008
- Ooor..they are all so good. Now don't you dare tell people to pick their favorite poem from you. XD
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- gabbel - 10/02/2008
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wow really amazing!
ya have a good vocabulary!
something i lack!
and it makes it more so interesting to read!
awesome job! - Report As Spam
- the_ashen_child - 09/28/2008
- wow that's real descriptive
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- iBrightScales - 09/28/2008
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I don't normally like shorter poems, but that is not the case with this one. I absolutely love it <3
You're amazing. - Report As Spam
- gokushin540 - 09/28/2008
- we all are.
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