Convoluted Love

• Artist: Loads Of Laughter
• Description: A poem about love in all it's confusing wonder. I was writing about a special person, and because of this it's extremely personal. I had considered changing the speech in it so it wouldn't be so personal, but decided against it. It seems right the way it is, and you can get that the person I wrote about really inspires a lot of emotion in me. I hope you enjoy, and hopefully relate, because love can cause wonderful growth in a person's heart.
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: convolutedlove

Rufusing to seek an end,
Or even solid ground.
Denying love in order to pretend
Not to see things which we found
In eachother--
Our hearts and minds,
Things not seen, but there to find.
During careful years and our friendships dejection
I've become disheartened
But, our kind of love can't be forgotten.
Infinitely my heart will make it's exceptions.
For you it will hold pain and doubts
Concentric Corporal Conceptions--
And above all
Patience.
That which we are not born with
But we slowly learn to know
You taught my heart to bleed and heal
But also how to grow.

Comments

[deeanna1212]

wow really nice..

[breakyaface]

realy nice, i had to reread to compleatly get what you ment, if you enjoy reading poems read mine, but none-the-less yours is really good.4/5

[LaSoulfire2]

Really nice

[Alfuncoot]

the last 4 lines are gold
the others are ok

[Nymphlover]

a poet? good choice, but a hard life.