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The poem was about a woman who went out on a walk, and during that walk she came upon two paths. One path was dark, frightful, and filled with hardships, and sitting on a stump at the mouth of that path was a small frog. The other path was different; it was lively, bright, and sitting on a throne at the mouth of the path was a prince, bejeweled with rubies and other precious stones. The woman, being a simple girl, of course decided that before she took any path, it would be best to speak to the representatives of either path.
When she reached the frog, it looked at her, opened its big mouth and spoke,
Beware the prince; he’s built of lies,And with those words, the frog up and leapt into the woods and she was left to ponder the frog’s advice. But, again, being a simple girl she thought it best to also speak to the prince as well. The bejeweled man saw her, stood up, and with a bow he began to speak,
And though, this path, your eyes despise,
With closer looks, you shall find
His path, a swamp, of dirt and slime
And the man you found so droll,
Was nothing better than a troll
An incarnation of wanton lust
Who’ll grind your bones into dust
And once you’re gone, there’ll be no more
Just your footprints on the floor.
And though, this path, your eyes despise
With its rot and with its flies,
With its slime, and with its bark
Though it be cold and fairly dark
It opens up into a garden
With no troll as its warden
No pain, no suffering, and no burden
Come down the path, come with me
Come down the path, and be set free.
Beware the frog, my dear sweet child
His path is cold and quite wild
Instead take this path of mine
Without the dirt, without the slime
Without the rot and filth and flies
That you certainly despise
He speaks of trolls and wanton lust
Of grinding bones into dust
But wrong, he is, for he’s a frog
Sits all day long, upon that log
And I, my dear, upon this throne
Will gladly make you feel at home
Ignore the frog, and come with me
Come down the path, and be set free.
It was no surprise which path she took. But sadly for this weary girl, the path that the frog described had turned into reality. As she walked down the prince’s path, the flowers wilted, melted, the ground turned into mud and slime, and finally, the trees died. And when she turned, the man, the handsome prince whom she had fallen for, had transformed into a hideous ogre.
- by pgsailormoon |
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- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: Frog and the Garden
- Artist: pgsailormoon
- Description: This is an excerpt from a much longer work that I wrote for my Independent Writing course in college. The full story is only 10 to 15 pages long, but because it contains curse words, I did not think it appropriate to post up. So, I posted up this excerpt instead.
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: frog garden
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Comments (4 Comments)
- mexicantacos2003 - 10/09/2008
- hey this is good.
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- xShakespearesxSisterx - 10/09/2008
- I love it! It is really great!
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- o0oLyrieLo0o - 10/08/2008
- i love it..
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- killajayxz - 10/08/2008
- long but nice
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