A Treasured Doll

• Artist: II j u n i a r t II
• Description: I wanted to post something written so I ended up thinking of a poem at the spot haha XD
  I tried to find a picture of a doll with red curly hair and a blue bow but nothing seemed to have the description which surprised me because everything (in Google) should be able to be found. Does that make sense??? Umm...i guess not...
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: treasured doll shelf mall collection

Treasured Doll

I was once a treasured doll
that everybody wanted
A foot and an inch tall
and never daunted.

There was a bow
up top my head
From which hair flow
with a shining red

I wore a dress
so rich and fine
I must confess
that it was mine

But time goes by
so very quickly
I idly cry
but no one sees me

My bow was lost
and my hair got tangled
My dress was tossed
and my smile was mangled

I'm coming undone
that much I'll say
I've had my fun
no time left to play

But I was myself
a treasured doll
Now left on a beautiful shelf
of a collection mall

Comments

[mycoolbunny]

i like it

[Moonie Angel]

Wow.. this is.. great..

[Percat]

I like it, but sometimes you sacrificed meaning for rhyme.

[neodapanther]

I actually started to write something with the same idea once... never finished it, therefore, kudos to you who has finished, lol. I would like to see more description, but that's just me. You did a pretty good job with your rhythm and rhyme, but I feel like if you pull it out a little more it's worth the effort.

[katclover27]

I love it.....