Forest of Dreams

• Artist: Ricochetra
• Description: I wrote this over a few different days,part of it I wrote sitting in the rain,another part walking down a path on a windy day,and the rest,sitting in my room.
  It's about a certain forest I go to a lot near my house.I'm so calm and together,I decided to write about it for once.
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: forest dreams

Here,where the rain does fall ever so sweetly,
Here,in this forest of gray,
Here where the ponds ripples balance,so peacefully
Here,where the leaves dare to sway.

Here where the crickets chirp ever so softly,
Here,in my forest of dreams,
Here,where the wind whispers evanescently,
Here,so much more than Here seems.

Here,where I find acceptance so calming,
Here,where the water still flows,
Here,the forest's orchestra leads me wandering,
Here,clad in vibrance,Peace goes.

Here,where all freedom remains independent,
Here,where the questions are gone,
Here,lie the things that remain so undented,
Here,I know life isn't wrong.

Comments

[minimel1]

it's has a nice rhythm and great vocabulary, nice imagery...5 stars biggrin

[_delted_--mfrag]

ode to a forest. nice, nature dosent get enough appreiceation these days

[musicbyme]

it is really great i like it