~forever~

• Artist: fire 100 fire
• Description: this is a poem im sure quite a few people who read it can relate to.please tell me in what areas i could fix my writing all critizism accepted
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: forever

i love you
you said yesterday
now here i lay heart broken in my room
evrywhere i look i swear its you
every time i look around i see your smile
i see your name written in the sky
ill love you forever
that's what you said
i guess forever isn't that long anymore
all i see now is you,
in the arms of another girl
i on the contrary
will love you forever
and to me forever
is forever

Comments

[Doomed gaara243]

This poem is amazing. I love it. Indeed forever to some is not that long but to the brokenhearted it is truely forever.