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Compliment him,
I'm fond of him,
Yet I'm wrong,
It's more than that.
Never felt this way,
Dreaming of him,
Feels like floating,
What's this feeling?
Is this what they call love?
Heavy humor, Troubled minds,
Tremors roll through the body.
Dare I trespass? Cross the line?
...I shall.
I hold his hand in mine
Life or death,
I'm in love with you:
You're my Heaven.
- by HolyCuppyCakes |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Heaven
- Artist: HolyCuppyCakes
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Description:
A poem I wrote. Does it sound right? >.< Please help. [By the way, Heavy humor means a sad mood.]
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: heaven
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ix-painful_desires-xi - 12/02/2008
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Thats so cute i really like it XD
i and it feels so real if you under stand what i mean. - Report As Spam
- PatheticPrincesss - 12/01/2008
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Thats so good Jordan
I miss you - Report As Spam
- pizzaeggs - 11/30/2008
- I like it. ^^
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- KraigKetamine - 11/30/2008
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Jack, according to the comment you left, no ones given you any s**t.
-Gives s**t. xD
It's uhmazing =D
I like it. - Report As Spam
- dreamweaver33 - 11/29/2008
- don't question yourself it sounds great! i love it!
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- brinababy77 - 11/29/2008
- that is so good
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- Vannacutt Nurse - 11/29/2008
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hehe
i love it!!
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