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Yin and Yang
“Brother my brother, what are we fighting for?
We have got to end this war.
Brother my brother reach out your hand
And I will take you from this hellish land.
To a place filled with plenty of light.
That, for you, will shine very bright.”
Said the brother to his twin.
They had been fighting for what seemed like forever.
One born as heaven’s angel, the other hell’s demon.
For centuries they fought with hate and rage,
But they both stared feeling trapped in a cage.
So when the angel met up with his twin
He said, “please, let’s not do this again.”
The demon knew his brother was right,
But evil and rage filled his sight.
So they fought for this last time.
Not knowing who would remain alive.
One was evil and one was good
They just couldn’t mix in their brotherhood.
And when you look back to find their names…
You’ll see that they were called Yin and Yang.
- by Mystic Nightclaw |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: Yin and Yang
- Artist: Mystic Nightclaw
- Description: I think this poem comes off as more of a story. I'm not really sure, but I hope you enjoy reading it!!!
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: yang
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Pandora Paradox - 03/13/2009
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Hm. The rhyme scheme feels too corny/forced and the voice seems to be telling too much and not showing. Yet there's something that I like about it, though what exactly I cannot say...
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- iBrightScales - 12/04/2008
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I like it.
:3
It's different, and interesting,
Good job. I hope to see more from you in the future. - Report As Spam
- miszunderrsztood_azn - 12/01/2008
- Dude, that was amazing. Great job! Keep it up!
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