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you.....you left me there.
you left as a crumbled heap.
filed with nothing you took it all away....
you left without a warning leaving me with nothing but a note.....
it said "i love you no more"....
so now i sit hear the flow of tears never ending.
my agony endless.
my heart is a hole now.....
YOU! you left me broken with nothing but a simple note to remember you a note with so little writing but the words hold a heavy meaning.
this note is the only thing i have to remember the pain....you....caused...me....
- by ninja_of_the_abyss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: the broken
- Artist: ninja_of_the_abyss
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Description:
well i wrote to realese a bit of feeling ive had locked up that has been eating away at me for awhile
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: broken
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- vanjoy - 01/05/2009
- try to put the lines into different stanzas
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- XxHailey-BugxX - 12/23/2008
- awww! this is soooo good! i luved it! and th emeaning and feelingz r so true! vry nice work! smile
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- Leo - 12/23/2008
- this is very good!
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- ~Shadey Sam~ - 12/03/2008
- everyone's writing has a meaning and your mind and heart might have wanted you to just leave your poem as it is. I like its a different, just let the words flow.
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