-
You would think death was painful
It is quite the contrary
After what you did that night
The heartstrings you ripped from me
The physical pain was nothing compared
And even though the lines of red may sting
The rivers rush down my wrist for the last time
It hurts no more.
- Title: Pain
- Artist: Kura-Gao
- Description: ...
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: pain
- Report Post
Comments (7 Comments)
- havikdemond2 - 05/30/2009
- luv'd it, r u emo? cuz theres a part that souds like u cutting
- Report As Spam
- Zeroye - 02/08/2009
-
Thank you for defending me Canibal Cupcake!(this is a different account)
hearts and cookies,
Kura - Report As Spam
- Cannibal_Cupycake - 01/02/2009
- oh, yeah--- ******** You with something hard and sand papery Cute Allie! *noob*
- Report As Spam
- Cannibal_Cupycake - 01/02/2009
- Cute Allie, don't be a bitchy fishy, first of all poems don't have to rhyme AT ALL!, Second, They don't have to be long and this DOES make sense (if you knew anything about poetry or life for that matter then you'd understand this poem) and Three, and don't criticize her feelings and writing and Kura-Gao don't you DARE quit because of what she says, I love your poem.
- Report As Spam
- Lex2442 - 01/02/2009
- *how* not hot to fix a terrible poem
- Report As Spam
- Lex2442 - 01/02/2009
- um.... here is three tips for hot to fix a terrible poem. 1.) MAKE IT LONGER AND MAKE IT MAKE MAKE MORE SENSE. 2.) POEMS USUALLY RHYME SOMEWHERE. 3.) IF YOUR A TERRIBLE POET THEN QUIT WRITING AND MAY I SAY IT? GET A JOB!
- Report As Spam
- -T I V E N I - 12/06/2008
-
nice nice.
i like it^ ^5/5 - Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
