I Don't Think This Is Working

• Artist: Charioteer
• Description: This is sometimes how i feel around someone I am starting to care about more and more. This is what I think I'd say if that all turned sour. Love can be really great, until you are hurt and don't know what to do.
  
  Writing for me, you don't have to like it.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: love pain suppressed

When I think of you
My fears all surface from my mind.
In the sense of pain and crying,
My feelings for you have made me blind

When I hear your voice
I look around, feeling cold.
Sensing suffering is near,
you used, to me, seem so bold.

Now, when I see your face,
All of myself comes undone.
In the presence of my savior,
Your also where my fears have begun.

How could something so good
Turn into such a mess
At first I felt so free to love,
Now I only feel suppressed.

I don't think this is work...
Goodbye

Comments

[un3dead3spirit3]

5/5 good job on the poem... ive felt that way before...so i can definitely understand where you were coming from when you wrote the poem. Check out my poems sometime, my best two are..."Im sorry" and "You".

[Nikki4815]

so true. 4/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message", and I recently added "Lost in the World"