your love to me

• Artist: eugenie cakezx3
• Description: this is about love from one's point of view. rate and comment please
  thankies :]
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: love

there is no hiding from lover's eyes
the only present love demands is love
the heart that once truly loves never forgets
love warms more than a thousand fires
your smiling at me is my daily dose of magic
your kiss still lingers on my lips, everyday is so beautiful
love only needs understanding; doesn't need to be spoken
love me little and love me long
when the words "i love you" were said by you for the first time
my world changes
tell me you are mine, i'll be yours though the end of time

Comments

[Ointmentz]

yes your circle buddy seems to have fallen in love :p
good luck with it :]

[iccyx3]

hmm...interesting
is my circle buddie in love?
what is his name?
if ur not, well..i think the poem is alright..
but like the others fix ur grammar

[The Love of Money]

Fix your errors.

[Ointmentz]

bravo :3
however you should fix the grammatical errors :]
other wise bravo