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And so I say,
Goodbye this day.
I only wished for something more.
To truly find,
What lies behind,
The forgotten dreams and it's lore.
So I walk,
This line of chalk.
Shattered, to be reborn anew.
I pray for all,
You never falter nor fall,
And take the best the world can offer you.
My time will come someday soon,
So, Farewell, Au revoir, Alvederzane, Adune.
Goodbye...
- Title: Broken Goodbye
- Artist: Dire_kala
- Description: this is gona be the last poem in my book some i'm looking for some input...good bad, change what sorta stuff
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: broken goodbye
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lychelle - 12/30/2008
- I like it, and I think it's something a lot of people can relate to. But do you mean Auf Wiedersehen and Adieu?
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- Adrenaline Monkey - 12/17/2008
- Nice!!
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