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he crys and asks why and all you here him do is sie cause all he wants to no is why this happened to him why the pain was brought to him his thoughts are so dim but why him and not his friend tim so he says good by as the pain makes him die and still he asks
Why!
By nubs6657
- Title: Why
- Artist: nubs6657
- Description: insane
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: emolisious
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Zajas - 12/28/2008
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Well, in the poetical sense, you took much liberty in the writing of your poem with no structure, grammar, or spelling of any worth, but somehow managed to get a point across, which brings me to the personal response to your poem...
The subject (him) cries, sighs, and asks why, because his perspective has been thrown askew with negativity and selfishness... no one can enjoy life while looking at it negatively, start with the small things and learn to be content with it or you'll get nowhere. - Report As Spam
- XxXxLunar eclipsexXxX - 12/21/2008
- This sucks lol! nice try though... loser.
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