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As i was riding the lush green feild wisping past me
all i could focous on was me and swaying with the horse
i had the horse move from a canter to a flat gallop
we were moving in the speed of light
shreiking with joy i almost fell
grabing a hand full of mane to keep me from falling off
i was laughing,enjoying the sunshine and how it felt to be in a saddle
then a horse and rider came up next to me out of no where
i couldnt see her face but her horse was magificent
a big black one with a white star on its forehead
she reached for my reins is slaped her hand away
relizing it was my best friend i stopped to a halt and fell forward in the saddle
completly shocked as if she scared me
she turned torward me smiled a warm friendly smile
i felt so happy but i coulnt figure 1 thing out
why was she here?i thought,and thought but nothing came
i turned around to see her vanish
i was struck with fear
then she waved and said WAKE UP
i was stock still relizing i was dreaming
i was so happy but scared then my best friend woke me up and we both started Laughing so hard it was hard to breath!!!! XD
- Title: Horsing around
- Artist: IRKookies
- Description: i felt like summitng one more after i entere the Eight Bells one hope u like it!
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: horsingaround
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Takashi Kyo - 12/24/2008
- it is ok but try to make it a tad shorter or choose a different theme for your poem.
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