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Dear somebody
Do you know how much you hurt us?
Dear somebody
Do you know that I feel like I barely
know you?
I know you are a follower
but you have a mind of your own too
I know you dont care
But do you know how much I care?
Christmas is here, but I cant find my cheer
are you going to be here for christmas?
or are you going to be there?
Why cant you see that we all miss you
you barely see us at all these days
and believe me, we are suffering
Because at the end of the day
things are not all about money
when you are dying I know you will not care
about the money you made yesterday
but about the time you didnt spend with your kids
that will be your regret
Because like I said, in the end of the day things aren't about
money
- Title: Dear Somebody
- Artist: KCO_rocks
- Description: This is a poem about my father. I know I have a few spelling errors. I think I spelt "aren't wrong"...LoL so if you know how to spell it could you please tell me. Besides the spelling errors I hope you like my poem
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: dear somebody father
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Comments (5 Comments)
- hiei116 - 02/27/2009
- Good job , very touching.
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- princess099 - 12/27/2008
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it is ok great job
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- PinkFire07 - 12/26/2008
- thats pretty good.
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- KCO_rocks - 12/24/2008
- thanks
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- atsyrk - 12/23/2008
- OMG OMG OMG SOOO TRUE!! you got some serious talent. You didnt have any spelling errors i saw... if u want, add me to ur friends and check out my own entries
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