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To care or not to care is my question.
It flows in and out of my mind as it pleases.
But the real question is.........
Why do i care?
Why cant i stop careing?
And why do i still care about him?
My questions remain unanswered
and my heart unmended
- by XxKitty_of_DeathxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Questions
- Artist: XxKitty_of_DeathxX
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Description:
This is a poem i wrote myself when i was alone in my room. i keep thining about my best friend/x-boyfriend. he is all i think about. i even dream about him when im sleeping. These are all the questions that keep rearing there ugly heads in my mind every day . Please tell me what you think . it is the first poem i have ever written so please enjoy it.:) - Date: 12/31/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Gothique Jedi - 12/22/2009
- This is really good smile
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- P-A-N-D-A-C-H-E-E-E - 04/07/2009
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LIKE WOW it's good!!!
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- Danika Miles - 01/06/2009
- Yea you do have it backwards however I personally think your poem could use some work.
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- visualkei_queen 101 - 12/31/2008
- Omg!! I love it. Good Vocab and genuine feeling. I totally feel your pain.
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- zosmaticy - 12/31/2008
- uhh, ithink you accidentally put the poem and description in the wrong places. nice though
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