inner questions

• Artist: waitingangelofdeath
• Description: being in the inner drakness of the mind.and questioning its saftey snd the world.likw everyone does in one point in life(edited)
• Date: 01/06/2009
• Tags: darkness safe innerquestions

I’m in the darkness
there is no coming out.
Not wanting to come out.
To the world in its dangers.
Humans
disease
war
fear
sadness.
All in the world.

But maybe I could come out to the
happy things in the world.
Animals
cures
peace
hope
happiness
is in the world to.

But the darkness is powerful.
Keeping me here.
In my mind.
It says that it is the only true safe place from the world.

But is it really that safe?
Or is that just a lie?
Is there somewhere that’s really a safe place to be?

May be,
but I think I’m going to stay here
in the darkness.
Just till I find my answer.
Just till then...
then I may come out.
Only maybe
will I come from my safe dark haven.

Comments

[clumsy-story of my life]

try fixing some of your spelling mistakes, its hard to get past that to give you a fair rating. now on to your actual poem, you could have had better word choice, but its not to bad. try reading mine sometime??

[mizchievous]

not bad! 3 stars!