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Oh sweet sir,
Doust thou not know i'm calling?
Grasp me with your sweet embrace
Hold me tight, don't let me fall,
Caress me like the Virgin Mary.
Oh divine man,
Doust thou mot see my lust?
Entwine about these covers,
Sprawl out on such warm skin
And take my breath away.
Oh dear love,
Doust thou not think i'm safe?
To pledge commitment,
To share the bond,
Till death do us part?
Oh sinful beast,
Doust thou not hear me crying?
Seeing you leave without me,
Departed and astray
Knowing i will never see your face.
Oh poor boy,
Doust thou not feel my pain?
Knowing i will not live.
i bleed for you but knowing...
you will never miss me.
- by Amani_Rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Noob R Us - 07/19/2010
- ...you copied like 7 famous stanzas from poems
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- mexicantacos2003 - 01/19/2009
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I saw this and I thought it was mine and you stole it.
BUT it is not the same one, it just LOOKS the same (almost).
2nd stanza 2nd line "mot" or "not"?
Didn't capitalize the "i" on the 4th stanza last line
and last stanza 3rd and 4th lines.
(other than that) It is awesome!! - Report As Spam