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Locked up.
Stuck in this room
Where darkness
Kills.
No light
By which to see.
Is there a
Door?
Shiver
In the damp.
Shutter
In the cold.
No way
To
Escape.
- by Pimpin_poem master |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/21/2009 |
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- Title: In the Dark
- Artist: Pimpin_poem master
- Description: I was listening to "Nobody's Home" by Avril Lavigne and the idea just hit me. Hope you like it... And understand it... -_-" Please vote or comment at least! ^.^ Enjoy!
- Date: 01/21/2009
- Tags: dark cold depressed escape
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Pimpin_poem master - 02/07/2009
- O hey Sinister, thanks.. I don't remember if I told you to vote or not.. rofl
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- Pimpin_poem master - 02/07/2009
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Why thankies Icey. I was hoping you wouldn't forget to vote! ^^
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- SinisterSandman - 02/04/2009
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I can't quite relate to it, but I can see the meaning you've put behind it. ^^
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- IceyTalonz - 01/30/2009
- Ah, quite deep meaning here. Very nice work, as usual from you, my friend. c: Totally 4.
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- Pimpin_poem master - 01/29/2009
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Thanks! I was hoping somebody could! ^.^
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- wolves_rampage - 01/27/2009
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This is really good, i can really relate.
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