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the couple that loved each other endlessly,
would soon be torn apart
but they would always keep their love for one forever always in their hearts.
the boy had to leave his beautiful love behind,
but he promised to come back for her
a promise that if broken he would die for sure.
he caressed her cheek and embraced her for the last time,
kissed her and said "i'll love you till the end"
these words to be amends.
she cried in his arms and said "i love you too",
he wiped her tears and held her tight
she was quivering with fright.
he then whispered something in her ear
a quiet low whisper that no one else could possibly hear...
he kissed her soft lips again and left.
the doors had closed and he was gone,
he went with a smile on his face
only hiding the pain deep inside that would soon pick up the pace.
the last single tear fell to the ground,
she knew she had to be strong and believed in his whispered words
he tried to stay in touch with her but an hour a day was all he could afford.
to her it was more then enough
she was happy she got to talk with him everyday
and didn't mind that there was a limit to pay.
a year went by where he stopped calling and writing
then another and another
she grew sad and cried... even so, she still kept hope in her heart.
four years had passed and he came back on the same day he had left,
he was so happy to be back and ran to her house
but no one was there not even a small mouse.
he looked everywhere but she was nowhere to be found,
a group of cute girls came up to him and asked him to play
he just ran forward and didn't even notice what they had to say.
he searched till the sun set,
and hadn't had anything to eat since morning
he then had reached their favorite spot
one they often went to a lot.
there they would lay on the beach and watch the sunset,
and he saw a small girl that looked familiar
he called her name from a few yards away
she turned and smiled at him with tears in her eyes.
he ran up to her and picked her up
he embraced her tightly and said "i promised i'd be back for you"
the girl caressed his cheek and said "i love you"
"i love you too"
the end~
- by dreamless_bunny |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: A Four Year Promise
- Artist: dreamless_bunny
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Description:
when you give someone your heart, you're trusting them not to break it... no matter what happens in the end. i wrote this for you and wo ai ni fei chang no matter what happens i love you
- Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: four year promise
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XxMonsterous MeganxX - 06/01/2009
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this is an amazing story,
its beautiful.
and yeah, i agree with starrygoddess,
i felt a little tearful.
its great. smile - Report As Spam
- SoleilMari - 01/28/2009
- aww... I agree with StarryGoddess... beautifully written...
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- Nightre - 01/24/2009
- Wow, the story is really quite something i felt a little tearful D: I like.
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