Deppression or Suicide?

• Artist: x Kebba x
• Description: I wrote this in class. not quite depressed just wishing time would pass... And im wondering.. what is this.. comments are much loved.. thanks
• Date: 01/28/2009
• Tags: suicide note poems

end me without parenthesis, im tired of saying sorry to these entities. My friends are fractions of me, but i wish to no longer live this fantasy. So ruthless, so cruel, you made me eat this gruel. But once i leave, i hope you can rest in peace, knowing you were the end of me. So please address the rest, and let them know that this, i gave my best. As i wallow, as i complain, i wonder... shall i die in vain? Nonetheless i did try my best, but i shall never fathom this unspeakable gasm you made in my heart which is now so cold and so dark in these now worthless days.

Comments

[Kalawyn]

Um...it doesn't sound like you gave much thought regarding the diction of the poem. But it sounds like you're depressed somewhat, though I wouldn't go so far as to say it sounds like a suicide note.

[x Kebba x]

please comment, much luv <3