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Like the knight loses the battle
The sword carved in his body
Losing his strength to fight
Your words pierced my heart
Wounding my whole body
And made my soul bleed...
My face covered by tears
Is no longer with the same colour
No longer happy and with the shine on my eyes
You whispered me words...wonderful words
And like a mortal poison
They consumed me Day after day
I can still feel the pain of your knife
Carved on my chest
The wounds still open
The sorrow you gave me is so deep
There's no human streght
That can remove this deceiver knife from my chest
It's so deep in my soul and my mind...
The only thing I can do
Is to live with it
For the rest of my life
- by BraveHunter |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/03/2009 |
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- Title: Never ending battle
- Artist: BraveHunter
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Description:
even knowing that this can happen with anyone...
we shall never give up and just go on :) - Date: 02/03/2009
- Tags: battle life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Surly animalluver - 02/06/2009
- very nice...5/5...
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- Kimono325 - 02/04/2009
- I am extremely proud of you. It makes me absolutely ELATED that you didn't force this to rhyme. Thank you, so much for that. The one thing I have to say about this is the quotation marks around 'knife' take those off, and it'll be as close to perfect as I think is possible. Seriously, this is raw emotion put to words, and it's very very good.
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