Let it begin

• Artist: BloodStainLoveStory
• Description: these are some lyrics i wrote for my band and im just gonna trial them here
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: begin demon this death song

Self, delusions all due to your apathy
Revive your broken body with the sweet kiss of razor blades
You are nothing but a martyr of your mind

Cut the tendon and show that your a real man
Your nothing but a shadow of your former self
And less to me
The only harmony you find is in the pain you cause yourself
Leave all you have behind and dig your shallow grave

You remain nothing but a speck on this earth
A speck forever beneath our feet
Crushed, defeated, nothing but a failure

Comments

[VvryukvV]

Not apathy but the very human condition itself. a nice outlook on it though. Think of why he is nothing but a shell of his former self, being able to put yourself in the shoes of others, that is what makes a great poet. 4/5

[Monstertastic]

5/5.
Really good.
You should make this a screamo.

[Ebonii Abyss]

ooh this is really good! It's very symbolicy =D

[lil_sexy_sweetheart001]

babe, I am just going to say this...you belong in a band and you are really good at writing lyrics. =] keep up the good work.

[fiishyy]

5/5. Real good.
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