Honeyless Pot

• Artist: Neko Turega
• Description: I was angry at someone i loved. she was being... mean... and i just wrote this out of anger and spite.
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: honeyless

So you say you want that honey
That sweet and golden goo
But what you fail to realize
Is it was right in front of you
You focused on a single bee
The one that cut you off
While another gathered nectar
Knowing it would never be enough
He tried and tried to win you over
'Til his small heart heard the knell
He doesn't care for you anymore
Now leave his life and go to hell

Comments

[FireFallAngel]

I like the way it flows, but then i got to the end and was disturbed. But it was still awsome. 5/5

[Happy-Go-Lucky Bear]

xD I really like this. Your rhyme scheme gives it a nice flow to it. I really like the imagery of the "sweet and golden goo." ^_^

[Hikaru1214]

wooooh....^o^