Wandering

• Artist: ~The_ Goddess _Athene~
• Description: I have written many, many, many poems, and even published a few of them. This poem is far from my best work, this is one of my "on the spot poems". My best poems I have mulled over for days, this one didn't take long at all. I'm not satisfied with the middle part of it but whatever (I can be bit of a perfectionist). Feel free to critique, critasize, comment, question, or whatever.
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: wandering

Wandering

We are forever wandering
trying to find our way
forever never stopping
until our dying day.
Until we ever get there
it will never be found
and we have gotten no where.
And through all my wanderings
I've always wondered so;
How can we ever get there
if we don't know the way to go?

Comments

[1-Zexion1No1VI-1]

nice..very good..i like it..

[~The_ Goddess _Athene~]

Yay... Thanks

[RisexWithxthexDead]

Omg that's verrryyy good :] 5/5 and I think I'm going to favorite it. <3